Persuasive Writing

This week in i did persuasive writing i was writing about how we should move lunch from 12:00 to 12:30.

I practised the lpg Persuasive Writing.

heres the story:

HPS should move lunch

HPS should move lunchtime from 12:00 to 12:30 because there won't be enough time in between  lunch and morning tea. Plus there will be plenty of time for maths time if we move lunch to 12:30.

Another reason is that children won't  be hungry at 12:00 and they will go home with a full lunch box . children will be hungry at 12:30 so they won't waste a nutrition lunch which is hard work and money for parents\caregivers.

My last reason is that if we move lunch then there won't be much time to wait after lunch which is good because then children won't have to wait for so long to go home.

Because of these reasons i mention i think that moving lunch to 12:30 will save money and hard work.